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Reviews For: The Heavenly Messenger, Book One, The White Surfer

SapphireEyes16
2007-07-29
ch 4,
abuseugh! this chapter made me cringe but i must say ur good at describing scenes, but anywayz keep updating!
SapphireEyes16
2007-07-14
ch 3,
abusewhat a fraky dream, her heart broke! anywayz keep updating!
SapphireEyes16
2007-06-29
ch 2,
abusenew characterz! i kno this is the second chapter but it is betta then the first so keep up the gud work!
PersnickitySnit
2007-06-29
ch 2,
abusewell, i'm impressed. this story is very well planned out and very well written. keep on writing, because you've got the potential to go places.

cheers, roxie.
SapphireEyes16
2007-06-10
ch 1,
abusei really like the theme of ur story so far, so keep up the updates!
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