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Reviews For: My Rebellious and Unrequited Heart
Gulia 2007-11-21 . chapter 1
*hugs*

who, who, who?!

Anyways, it's pretty, and I can completely relate, to almost every line.

"This love I feel

Is hollow and forbidden

I shouldn’t but I do"

Um, hell yes. I have concluded that every girl in the universe has a boyfriend, so I might as well stop trying, right?

"Is it love I feel

Or just companionship?

Is this unrequited love

Or a true friendship?"

Why can't people just hold up sings? "I'm flirting." "I have a crush on you." "Commit acts of questionable hygine with me now." Life would be much simpler, yes?

"You can’t love me

Nobody does"

You know I wouldn't let that go, right? I love you. Erin loves you. Your mom loves you. And who knows? This person might too. You're not unlovable dear. don't listen to that little voice that says you are.
Natana Reccama 2007-11-17 . chapter 1
I really enjoyed this! Beautiful! It expresses so much. Like the feelings of your heart and soul were put onto paper. Again, beautiful. ~NR
Lady Rainwind 2007-07-25 . chapter 1
I can relate.. Thanks for posting! And hey, I love Missing Person by Michael W. Smith!
Cross Rose 2007-06-08 . chapter 1
Really cool. I really liked it, keep up the work xD
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