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| Cupid's Jinx 2007-12-15 ch 2,  | abuseWho's watching her? Is it an elf? A tall, dark and handsome prince? I like it. No, scratch that. I love it! How come everyone's a better writer than me!? It simply isn't fair! Lyra -x- |
| Aomera 2007-09-20 ch 2, | abusehehe very cool. liking it still! um which ones rosie and which oens me, i mean based on, very loosely! good work :) love you x |
| Mythical Luver 2007-06-24 ch 1, | abuseHey! I really liked this, and it seemed to me that you could go a lot further with this story than where you left off. I would love it if you continued with this, even though it is a one-shot. I like your writing, and I again, I would love it if you continued this. ~Mythical Luver~ |
| Melisa Massacre 2007-06-18 ch 1, | abuseOh, please continue! Please, I really like this story! |
| Enaid 2007-06-17 ch 1, | abuseaedyn outsmarted herself should have gone w/ the flowers *shakes head while trying not to laugh* anywhoo this ones seems amazzling (credits to u for the word) so far and i cant wait to see more of killian. hope u did well on ur french exam! |
| Aomera 2007-06-08 ch 1, | abusehehe i like it! yeh the first and last sentences are very clever :) and some of the language is beautiful - and yey you used the liquid gold thing! i love the chracters, especially the boy, hes so cool! and the names too - well chosen in the end and very pretty :) well done! x |
| posie 2007-06-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseYay! that's so cool and exciting, and i wish that had really happened to us, i feel so privilaged to be in your story and get kidnapped. and rescued by you, yay! i love picking flowers, and i love faeries poem too. I wish i loived in a tree palace, that would be cool. :D don't get the she was being watched from above bit, who is watching her, o. exciting. :D x |
| Clarelouise 2007-06-08 ch 1, | abusei lovethe beginning and ending sentence! my outift is very kl as is the palace! dream... |
| Laughing In the Night 2007-06-07 ch 1, | abusePix, this is terrific! Update, please? |