|Reviews for opposites attract|
| Ghost n' Ghoul Girl 5/5/10 . chapter 9
VERY good so far
| Ghost n' Ghoul Girl 5/5/10 . chapter 5
ok, this is very good so far, but you have a LOT of type-os. im very good with that stuff, so if you want i could betta you...thats when u send me a chapter before you post it on fictionpress and i read it, fix the spelling/grammer errors, look for any holes in the story line (ex: If sammantha is holding a spoon in the begging of the chapter, and by the end of the chapter, she appears to still be holding the spoon even though she is hanging from a cliff). i will show my changes in red and send it back to you. you can then either post what i fixed, or post your old one. i would be happy to be your betta, i love you story so far.
| Around.the.Rainbow 11/16/07 . chapter 9
I loved it. It was so emtoional, and just plain awesome. I really really liked it
| Baby Sass 11/4/07 . chapter 9
LOve It can't wait for the next one.
| Penguin Shadows 11/2/07 . chapter 1
it such a lovely story love!lol
| colbsterrr 9/13/07 . chapter 1
so, i don't care what your profile says, i'm going to say this: GRAMMAR GRAMMAR GRAMMAR! SPELLING SPELLING SPELLING! all of your writing pretty much sucks with out it.
| Love Kills Slowly 8/17/07 . chapter 9
I'm going to be honest, this story is horrible, the plot is ridiculous and lame, and the writing is choppy and rushed, learn how to capitalize and proof read.
| FM Radio 7/28/07 . chapter 9
You have to update soon! Please!
| FM Radio 7/28/07 . chapter 1
I really like this as a first chap! Such an awesome idea!
| Black Viper 7/15/07 . chapter 9
| cxx 7/2/07 . chapter 7
great story and storyline but you should proof read your work because the bad grammar made it hard to read but other than that good job!
| Black Viper 6/24/07 . chapter 7
Very good plot.. Interesting and realistic..
I like it..
| psycho-vampire-princess 6/14/07 . chapter 7
Sweet. U need to work on your punctuation and grammar. Other than that, Sweet!