Yeah...nice work. I love the summary, and the questions you ask got more and more true the further through the poem I get. Interesting...

I like this. It's all so true. I especially like the second one. Lovely work.

Falcon

P.S. Your profile reminded me of myself. Which was weird. But I decided that since we seem so alike I would check out your work.

First off, thanks for reviewing Cocoon. Feedback = chocolate = love.

Second, your profile reminded me of someone I know...especially with your soul being prayed for because you read Harry Potter. I too am a die-hard fan and can't stand Laura Mallory-types who insist J.K.R. is out to convert everyone to satanism.

Thirdly, this poem was fantastic. I too am often frustrated with the human race, and broken promises, and endless thought rather than action.

Overall, excellent work, and I hope you post more soon.

Julia

I love how very truthful this poem is. And (not intentionally meaning to use the line from your poem) isn't it funny how by trying to be different, everyone is the same? Nice job!
~Gemma