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| simpleplan13 2007-09-03 ch 1,  | abuseI like the stanza about writing instead of speaking.. I can totally relate to that.. the format is great.. adn teh ending is awesome also.. nicely done |
| Exodus.Escence Of Sin 2007-06-21 ch 1, | abusei liked this one, very good ~*evanescence123*~ |
| Leaving Here 2007-06-15 ch 1, | abuseoh, wow. powerful. i love the differency b/t lines. |
| The Postscript 2007-06-08 ch 1, | abuseWonderful, I especially liked the second stanza. Great use of format - the spaces and slashes. I also love how you wrapped the whole poem together by mentioning the "why" you started with. It really adds this element of peace in an otherwise confusing time. Great work. Keep writing, k. |
| recycle rhymes 2007-06-08 ch 1, | abuseyour new name goes well with your new style. it just gets you a different edge. i'm recycling rhymes because that's where i started (and i'm going through a rhyming phrase). i really like your new style. seems to be more raw...but just that's good emotional rush that poems should have. nice work. |
| Gemma Lovell 2007-06-08 ch 1, | abuseI love how used used proper punctuation but didn't capitalize anything, and the emotional impact is great. Nice job, and thanks for your review! ~Gemma |
| Hermione-Hermyown 2007-06-07 ch 1, | abuseI liked it, good job at catching the emotion in the poem. I liked how deep it was, and very sensitive. Great work, I look forward for more poems from you! |