Like I said, it's in my workshop, so I'll have fun editing this for you. Needed to update stuff, so it might take a while. It looks good from just a good skim though. Always a pleasure to read your works. ^^

amazing.

Cool. No, REALLY cool. plz, write more.

I enjoyed reading this. I think, even though it is not overly long, it works well that way. I can't think of anything I'd suggest to change or whatever right now since it's kind of late at night. Anyways, good work.