The night shall not be easy

Wind, howling, shrieking now

The rain begins to fall, lashing

Thin skin, making all screech ow

My favorite part... It is a dash of humor and doesnt make the poem overdramatic, but real nonetheless. Great descriptive adjectives. Why do you only have one piece published?

Active words, for sure. But I can't feel the style and substance of this piece. It seems like it has something important to tell as well, but I feel it's overshadowed with the indecisive lead the poetry takes. It's evident It's a potential piece, nonetheless.
Cya!
~Wishdream

so neat!! its typical midwestern weather for me. i really like it.