This is a beautiful analogy to the Gospel Story. I like how you present it from the girl's point of view. I espeacially like the part where she never thought about her "perfect life" or why there never was sickness until she got the "White Death". Very well done!

I'm really sorry that no one has reviewed this for you because it is amazing.

At the beginning, it seems like an olden day story of a rich girl who becomes ill and then is shunned to live in the poorest of conditions. But then you branch out and bring in the One. A wonderful job!

Your descriptions are awesome! You bring so much detail into your writing, I can just see your settings and the things happening around your character.

There was a small typo in this sentence. I wrote it in CAPS for you to see.
I was banished, away from family, away from friends, TO THE place I had previously thought only existed in far-fetched legends: The City of Outcasts.

I love your closing sentence. It is so true and beautiful.

Again, wonderful work!

Blessings,
~Angel

PS Thank you for the review!