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viennacantabile
2008-05-29
ch 1,
abuse::faint:: such lovely, heartbreaking images. instant favorite!
Tytherpol
2007-06-30
ch 1,
abusei like the. . . . i guess the word is tone.
it's a good poem.
C.J. Mahan
2007-06-19
ch 1,
abuseYou've got too much talent
dystopia
2007-06-16
ch 1,
abuseoh my god! this makes me speechless. it's amazing.
lackluster
2007-06-12
ch 1,
abuseit sounds like an epitaph...for two people? maybe i'm taking it too far. yes...definitely.
nonetheless, and you already know it, i love the way you write.
poetic abortion
2007-06-09
ch 1,
abuseLovely.

It's just so...so...

I don't really know; it just fits so well and--

Yeah, I think I'm imagining this, but it kind of made all fluttery and happy and, yeah.

It's almost-cute [ie. the beethoven-line = love].

- Noelle
she smolders
2007-06-09
ch 1,
abuseThis just reminds me why I've always wanted to be able to play the piano.

Just gorgeous and lovely and wonderful and special. Take care.
amillionlittlepieces
2007-06-08
ch 1,
abuse'the hollow of his heart...'

being frail throws a relationship in to the wind.
i know.
the most we can hope for is love.
and it looks like you know.
mizu no kokoro
2007-06-08
ch 1,
abusethe tone was well established. the idea came across. good job


keep writing
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