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| viennacantabile 2008-05-29 ch 1, | abuse::faint:: such lovely, heartbreaking images. instant favorite! |
| Tytherpol 2007-06-30 ch 1, | abusei like the. . . . i guess the word is tone. it's a good poem. |
| C.J. Mahan 2007-06-19 ch 1, | abuseYou've got too much talent |
| dystopia 2007-06-16 ch 1, | abuseoh my god! this makes me speechless. it's amazing. |
| lackluster 2007-06-12 ch 1, | abuseit sounds like an epitaph...for two people? maybe i'm taking it too far. yes...definitely. nonetheless, and you already know it, i love the way you write. |
| poetic abortion 2007-06-09 ch 1, | abuseLovely. It's just so...so... I don't really know; it just fits so well and-- Yeah, I think I'm imagining this, but it kind of made all fluttery and happy and, yeah. It's almost-cute [ie. the beethoven-line = love]. - Noelle |
| she smolders 2007-06-09 ch 1, | abuseThis just reminds me why I've always wanted to be able to play the piano. Just gorgeous and lovely and wonderful and special. Take care. |
| amillionlittlepieces 2007-06-08 ch 1, | abuse'the hollow of his heart...' being frail throws a relationship in to the wind. i know. the most we can hope for is love. and it looks like you know. |
| mizu no kokoro 2007-06-08 ch 1, | abusethe tone was well established. the idea came across. good job keep writing |