::faint:: such lovely, heartbreaking images. instant favorite!

i like the. . . . i guess the word is tone.
it's a good poem.

You've got too much talent

oh my god! this makes me speechless. it's amazing.

it sounds like an epitaph...for two people? maybe i'm taking it too far. yes...definitely.
nonetheless, and you already know it, i love the way you write.

Lovely.

It's just so...so...

I don't really know; it just fits so well and--

Yeah, I think I'm imagining this, but it kind of made all fluttery and happy and, yeah.

It's almost-cute [ie. the beethoven-line = love].

- Noelle

This just reminds me why I've always wanted to be able to play the piano.

Just gorgeous and lovely and wonderful and special. Take care.

'the hollow of his heart...'

being frail throws a relationship in to the wind.
i know.
the most we can hope for is love.
and it looks like you know.

the tone was well established. the idea came across. good job


keep writing