Very interesting poem, well-written and beautifully descriptive. Good work, and thanks so much for your review!!
~Gemma

Sheraine has struck again...I should have known. At least she was probably joking about "her virgin eyes" with yours...I don't think she was with mine.

Interesting piece...reminds me of my obsessions with fictional characters, and why can't real boys be like that, damn it. Ok, suppressing that particular rant, and back to reviewing.

"Intense blue penetrates my mind's eye
And a blossom of emotion fills me."

Best lines of the poem. Beautiful imagery.

Looking forward to reading more.

Julia

I honestly thought that you had a fictionpress. (And I should have totally known when I saw that thing from This still came as a surprise to me however. Heh.

Anyway, it's amazing how you made this poem so short and yet it said so many things. Of course I do have to say that reading this was a shock to my virgin eyes. (Ehh, not really actually.)

But I loved it. It's like that saying, good things come in small packages...or something like that.

This was a really sad poem, but also really beautiful. Wow, is all I can think to say. Nice work.