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| Cross Rose 2007-07-20 ch 1,  | abuseWow...really good. Keep it up :D |
| The Melancholy Cocoa Bean 2007-06-08 ch 1, | abuseI'm in love with the imagery. It's well scene. Nice! The last line is very prominant. x |
| Tytherpol 2007-06-08 ch 1, | abusei think you should just title it 'dancing' i know, of course, there's a further meaning than that, but sometimes it's better just to give something like that a title. anyway, it's a good poem. i like it. |