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Ish Mish Kiki 2007-08-23 ch 3,	abuseso sorry to point it out, but 99 luftballons actually means 99 air balloons, litterally translated. not red balloons. continuing with the story now...
Silver Rain Fell 2007-07-11 ch 5,	abuseOh. Poor Justin... I loved the bit at the end with Kirby coming and comforting him. There were some classic lines in this chapter, too. Love it, as always!
Midnights Scream 2007-07-02 ch 5,	abuse:) i think it's really cute.
say this sooner 2007-06-30 ch 5,	abusecute story! i love this so far. update soon!
chekiita 2007-06-29 ch 5,	abusei love this story it's soo cute!!
the sacred night 2007-06-13 ch 5,	abuseYou are so cute. So is Mikey. So is Kirby, and so is Justin. Pet Mikey and Jeffy for me. I like the image at the very end where Kirby comes to comfort Justin after Justin hears about his dad. Very sad and yet sweet. I don't know why the mom would lie to him like that, though. The idea of the dad leaving for another woman wouldn't exactly do wonders for the kid's mental health, either. She could have at least made up something that didn't sound like saying the dog you had put down is actually on a farm with lots of space to run around. She's not a very good mom.
Abstruse Blue 2007-06-11 ch 5,	abuseI would have reviewed the last chapter, but for some reason it didn't let me earlier. Well anyway, poor Justin! But this story is real cute though this chapter was a little sad. It makes me miss my old cat, Shina. sniffles I'd get another one if my dad wasn't so adamant against one. Oh well...Interesting chapter, keep it up!
the sacred night 2007-06-10 ch 4,	abusePoor naive child. It's a sorry state of affairs when you're more naive at 18 than someone who's spent almost their entire life as a cat.
the sacred night 2007-06-10 ch 3,	abuseThe guy accepts the idea of Kirby being human too easily and too fast, but the scene is otherwise nice. Maybe he could ask Kirby something that only Kirby would know, but then he might just think he had a stalker. He could ask him stuff about their childhood maybe. Or he could see markings on him that look like Kirby's markings or see something else about him that somehow proves it correct.
the sacred night 2007-06-10 ch 2,	abuseI like the scene at the end where he discovers Kirby. It's cute. I especially like the yellow pajama bottoms; that was a nice touch. The sentence "So now I live in a very noisy place with Kirby studying English" makes it sound like Kirby is the one studying. You need a comma after Kirby's name. It is amusing though that the very next sentence is a speculation about Kirby's reading ability. Maybe he really is the English major of the house. The bit about the family being rich and all the scholarships and the doctor saying he has to live off campus for his mental health all seemed a trifle too convenient, but it's nothing major. I like how the guy first talks about why girls reject him and then considers gay guys. It subtly gives the impression he doesn't know what his sexual orientation is, and isn't particularly worried about it. You have to be pretty cool to be like that, just open to whatever it ends up being.
the sacred night 2007-06-10 ch 1,	abuseHolding the horses... holding them... holding... ** it. On to the next chapter.
Silver Rain Fell 2007-06-10 ch 4,	abuseShiny update. I really like how you're going about this story, you know? Not rushing the plot, adding tiny drops of humour, the way the main character has a past, a personality and a style of narration. Keep it up!!
Violent Pornography 2007-06-10 ch 4,	abuseso far i love this story the characters are super cute but i love cats so maybe im biased ^.^ violent **
Abstruse Blue 2007-06-08 ch 3,	abuseaww, this is really cute. I like it so far, interesting plot. Kirby is such a cute name!
Silver Rain Fell 2007-06-08 ch 3,	abuseCan I just say that this is the weirdest story idea ever? It also really, really works. I love this story so far, because it's really different. Nice tone, completely fluent. And "Form? Kirby doesn’t have forms. He’s a cat. He’s been a cat for 18 years," actually floored me. BRILLIANT LINE. I'm really looking forward to an update, and don't understand why this doesn't have more reviews.

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