The title says it all: Summer Love. This is cute and it's got a lighter tone than your other one. The ryhme scheme flows nicely and as far as I can tell there were no problems. You've got a way with words and it shows in your poetry. This is done very nicely and just like the other poem you wrote, you've made it an enjoyable read. Keep up the great work and keep writing. I'd like to see more of your stuff up here.

And by the way in case you didn't figure it out from my last review: This is Lacy. My new penname is Black Pearls. That's all for now. I'm out.

you have rerally good rhyme

i love poems about love

your a great wrtier