Hey, you deserve a few more reviews than what you've got here! Allow me to be the first to review this. ;)

Aw... I prefer non-free verse (at least I like rhyme scheme), but I can't say I haven't written a few free-verses.

I LOVE this poem. The descriptions are very vivid and word choice is awesome, too. It's kind of funny how at the end, all the narrarator can say is, "Yes, please." lol.