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Basara 2007-06-12 . chapter 1
the thoughts of a despaired person hiding in a facade by daylight... yes, a misery even if it's not that literal death itself...

oh, the sweet grace of darkness itself...

nice!
Definition 2007-06-09 . chapter 1
The last line is perfect. Nice job!
Katja de Wit 2007-06-09 . chapter 1
Wow, that's quite...wow. :)
~Katja
a silenced revolution 2007-06-08 . chapter 1
Certainly is dark. I rather like it, and the ending goes perfectly with the other two lines.
Charlotte Makepeace 2007-06-08 . chapter 1
I love it. I can't say anything more, i'm afraid. It's rather hard to comment on a haiku! Anyway, i like the imagery it carries very much.
Anthony C. M. Thomas 2007-06-08 . chapter 1
Very very nice. I love the rhythm the first line has. Amazing work. This is being favorited.
Rapture Whispers 2007-06-08 . chapter 1
Very nice. It starts off dark and depressing and then ends sort of like the lines of a child's book, so peaceful and innocent. It's wonderful! Continue!
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