hm, the contrasting images...

nice...

I like it. You managed to cram imagery, emotion and symbolism into that tiny little thing. Amazing.

The thing I like about this is that it doesn't have to be about a winter watermelon, it could be symbolic of many people/things. Nice work!

that's pretty awesome. I like it a lot.

I really loved this. The wording and the last line was just perfect. Great haiku, keep it up.

Ashelin