Possessed by Jack Sparrow, are we? Or perhaps Will Turner?

Liked the imagery but I have issues with long, skinny poems (probably because I used to write like that). I guess it works for the subject matter well...seems like how Jack Sparrow would write a list...on a thin slip of paper rolled up in a bottle. :)

Update more soon!

Julia

Wow. I love the line layout and the repetition of "The Sea is my freedom." Lovely poem with a great theme.

Falcon

Very cool. I like the way the short lines make the poem pump like a drum, and the stops add to the meaning and the feeling of the poem. Well done. And thanks for the review.