Wow! This is a really bizarre story. Very unique indeed.
I like how the narrator felt very realistic, she kinda reminds me of someone I know.
And there were times that I felt like I wanted to stop reading, but for some reason I just kept reading to find out what else is happening!
Very smart move. I'll be reading your other chapters soon.
Please review my story! :]

Once again you have a very unique writing style that describes you perfectly, even though like you said, I obviously don't know you. FYI--I will keep reading.

that was funny. I can't believe I actually did read that entire thing, but I just wanted to see where you would go with it. I noticed you have many more chapters for me to read. I'm definitely curious, that's all I have to say...oh and I like your writing style by the way. You actually use grammar...nice.

The overall feel to it came across as choppy. I felt there should be actually more happening and not just bouncing thoughts.

The character seemed realistic though.

The thing that ruined it for me though is your reference to the readers. I like to be caught in the happenings of someone's mind or someone's experiances, and mentioning the readers took that away completely for me. Instead of being an observer of natural events or natural thoughts, I felt more like I was watching something contrived on stage.

that was awesome! I loved it!

Either you've had experience with college life or you have psychic powers because I am supposed to clean my room, talk about coincidence I'm interested in this already

I was so glad to finally see an update for this story. Your way of saying things so honestly and wisely has captured me once again. I can hardly praise your style enough, it's just so emotional and yet wonderfully controlled. I feel almost like I know all your friends.
I can relate to many things you've said here, especially not knowing whether it's right to be self-sacrificing or to be self-indulgent. You're right when you say it's a fine line, but you should try, at least somewhat, to allow some emotional indulgences for youself, if it'll make you happier. You may disagree, but I just wanted to say that because I know it from experience.
I hope everything works out beautifully for you.

Well, it definitely kept my attention...I think I'll read on. I printed it from the library and I'm gonna take it home. If I like it, I'll read more tommorow! Tanks you for the entertainment, and I truly hope YOUR story can catch my attention...if it's about what I think it is...I'll love it! So cheers: to your story!
~a.kiss.without.any.shame

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHA SMART WAY OF GETTING READERS!Love it. Review me please.

Your writing is touching me deeply. It's giving me perspective I didn't have before, and it's pulling it's own drama into reality.

Thank you for being so honest and open, I await the next chapter with bated breath.

I think this is an absolutely wonderful story. Your words are filled with emotion, and I can feel every character as if they were a friend of mine. I love your prose style, and I love the way you say things just as they are. I would love to give you constructive criticism, but I truly cannot see a thing you should work on or change. I haven't been so involved and interested in a story on fictionpress in quite a while. I am sort of curious to know more about the 'dark issues' you mentioned once, but I suppose you can include that in future chapters should you be so inclined. I could go on about how much I love this for thousands of words, but I would hate to bore you. Basically, you did a magnificent job!

Hey Nickle!

I just wanted to say that I love hearing the history of the SG-1 from someone who lived at the center of it, rather than the outskirts. As always, well written and well lived! Thank you for updating, now get to the part where I really join the story, dammit!

~Fairy

I love it. I have to say, you have so much wit as a writer, and the fantastic flow was there. Oh my gosh I was to hear more!

Goodness, it's tragic when friends turn out not be be friends. I know how this goes (as does every teenager I think). I can't wait to hear more of your life. As to the story, the flow is wonderful (flow seems to be one of your greatest skills, in your storys and poems), and your good at keeping things interesting and dramatic. Keep it up! You should light a fire under those writing hands and get more chapters out! (please...:))

Huh, it's good! It got out of it's feeling of the same thing over and over. But then again I said it would. You've got my interest! I want to read more, I have a feeling this story will hold interest real well, and readers will be on the edge of their seat, going "damn it, thats it? What happens next?". Keep going...and fast!

On a different note... I sew you're remark about me on your homepage. I guess you were getting me back for making you blush by making blush! But thanks anyway.