Me like! ^^

Lovely, lovely.

I'm loving the format--I could only dream of what it would look like without FP screwing around with it. I think it would be quite lovely and abstract (and I love abstract), I can barely contain myself and, yeah.

I have to say this before I sign-off: your diction just makes everything perfect about this. There isn't a word out of place and one not needed to create the mood, nothing is a hinderance to your flow/voice/mood, it's all very much needed and... Well, perfect.

(Gosh darnit, this seems like a perfect time to insert those damn hearts. But. I. Must. Resist. MUST.)

More coherent review next time--on my poetry account--once I've gotten enough sleep to actually come up with something...constructive, I guess...to say.

♥

- as beauty dies

Absolutely Amazing. I love the metaphors behind "Ocean Boy and Desert Girl", how opposites complete eachother.

beautiful :)