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| Amindaya 2007-06-09 ch 1,  | abuseMe like! ^^ |
| as beauty dies 2007-06-08 ch 1, | abuseLovely, lovely. I'm loving the format--I could only dream of what it would look like without FP screwing around with it. I think it would be quite lovely and abstract (and I love abstract), I can barely contain myself and, yeah. I have to say this before I sign-off: your diction just makes everything perfect about this. There isn't a word out of place and one not needed to create the mood, nothing is a hinderance to your flow/voice/mood, it's all very much needed and... Well, perfect. (Gosh darnit, this seems like a perfect time to insert those damn hearts. But. I. Must. Resist. MUST.) More coherent review next time--on my poetry account--once I've gotten enough sleep to actually come up with something...constructive, I guess...to say. ♥ - as beauty dies |
| Stella Grimshaw. 2007-06-08 ch 1, | abuseAbsolutely Amazing. I love the metaphors behind "Ocean Boy and Desert Girl", how opposites complete eachother. |
| magalina 2007-06-08 ch 1, | abusebeautiful :) |