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InkySubstance
2007-09-30
ch 1,
abuseIronic, but really sad.
The Mumbling Sage
2007-06-15
ch 1,
abuseJune 8 is my birthday. I've sorry for your loss. Your teacher seems to have been very important to you.

The poem sounds very nice, especially when just read aloud like someone's monolouge.
alexis
2007-06-12
ch 1, anon.
abuse=( those are my tears. tragically beautiful gets a lot more tragic when u know who the poem refers to. the poem is beautiful tho. ='(
Wolf's Night
2007-06-10
ch 1,
abuseI still can't believe he's gone. It doesn't seem real yet I know he's not coming back...I think all of us wrote something for him here.

Love the last stanza.
Kira's Song
2007-06-08
ch 1,
abuseSo well written and so sad! I recently lost a professor of mine, too. :/
-Cristina
VelvetSea
2007-06-08
ch 1,
abuseI tried to write something for him and couldn't. You puit all our thoughts into coherent words.

Part that broke my heart:

Surrounded but apart, and all alone.
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