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| InkySubstance 2007-09-30 ch 1, | abuseIronic, but really sad. |
| The Mumbling Sage 2007-06-15 ch 1, | abuseJune 8 is my birthday. I've sorry for your loss. Your teacher seems to have been very important to you. The poem sounds very nice, especially when just read aloud like someone's monolouge. |
| alexis 2007-06-12 ch 1, anon. | abuse=( those are my tears. tragically beautiful gets a lot more tragic when u know who the poem refers to. the poem is beautiful tho. ='( |
| Wolf's Night 2007-06-10 ch 1, | abuseI still can't believe he's gone. It doesn't seem real yet I know he's not coming back...I think all of us wrote something for him here. Love the last stanza. |
| Kira's Song 2007-06-08 ch 1, | abuseSo well written and so sad! I recently lost a professor of mine, too. :/ -Cristina |
| VelvetSea 2007-06-08 ch 1, | abuseI tried to write something for him and couldn't. You puit all our thoughts into coherent words. Part that broke my heart: Surrounded but apart, and all alone. |