i really like this, and you wrote it about yourself from a outside perspective was done very well

Interesting idea. I liked how it was written too.

This would be my Lisa...
I Loved that you wrote about yourself. I would have never thought to do that...
This only makes me miss you More!

Holy cow! This is awesome! I love the idea of writing about yourself.

This was cool! I really liked this! It'll go in my favorites! Your ability to see your own life from someone else's perspective is facinating! Your adjectives and setup was good too, giving the story a nice tune to it. This was enjoyable to read! Keep it up and write more!
The Reverse Edge Blade

I hate talking on the phone too. Pretty good poem about yourself.

~SirScott

Whoever this person is, she's unique. I would read whatever she write lol so yeah nice poem.