Real good. I for once liked it's shortness...it was cutting and to the point. Loved the last sentence. I imagined bits in my head while i was reading which is great. Loved teh beginning sentence too. Really good.

I like this, it speaks to a lot of people. In other words, its real haha. Keep it up!
Faith

Good poem about betrayal. Betrayal is the theme I would give this poem, but I usually get it wrong.

~SirScott