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| readergirl1 2007-07-13 ch 2, | abuseSo Rod likes Melina and now he's trying to block...hm. |
| CK Shorty 2007-07-11 ch 1, | abuseI'm interested, and I love the show Smallville! I'm addicted! Anyway, the part where she was at home, and then it was school, confused me. Maybe put a break right there, because I had to read it over to make sure where she was exactly. OTher than that, I really liked the first chapter :) |
| anonymous 2007-07-11 ch 2, anon. | abuse=D i really like it so far but i'm a bit confused...not really confused though. more like "what does melina look like?" "where do they live" "who is her family?" i hope you can answer these questions really quick cause that will make my day. and when i say that i don't mean like replying back and answering. i mean like in the story lmfao also it would be nice if you have some longer chapters...keep the sweetness rolling on lmfao jk anywho byeza ~.^ |
| MarkedBYMelinda 2007-06-23 ch 1, | abuseI'm loving this. And haha, we shower for the same amount of time basically. CONTINUE! |
| readergirl1 2007-06-09 ch 1, | abuseOk I'm hooked now. Whats up with Melina? |