I'm interested! But I'm also a little confused with all the point of view changes & Japanese thrown in there. I don't know any Japanese so when the girl said '"Tasukete…"' I thought she was just saying a name or something. Is that weird? Just remember who your audience is (cause they might not know any Japanese either).
Keep writing :)

Okay. I like the idea, I just don't know if I like the way you wrote. I think you could really go back and edit the hell out of this. You create a cool visual , but I think that if you were to go back and make it a little more...fancy sounding, it would get the point across. If if makes sense, you need to give Weather personality to reflect the feelings of the character.