Reviews for The Taker and the Donor

Kolostramin
2007-06-11
ch 1,

abuseI don't believe I've read or reviewed any of your first person stories, so I can't say which you write better. I can say, however, that you write third person at least acceptably...
whatever that means.

This is one of those short tales which lacks a grand meaning. It needs none. I suppose you could define it as a "brief jolt of calm nastiness." Or something like that. For me, it isn't that disturbing, as I was expecting something like this. "Casual evil" is perhaps another phrase, or "intentional amorality."

But because I'm a stickler for grammar and spelling, I suspect you intended to write the story's title on your story list as "The Taker and the Donor". At the moment it is "The Taker and the Doner" but is spelled correctly in the story itself.

I just went back and saw how many peculiar tales you have. I think I'll have to read some of them. Ciao.

K. Stramin

Faith Adeline
2007-06-09
ch 1,

abusewow, I liked that. You could very easily turn it into a story. Keep it up, I'll have to check out some of your other work :)
Faith

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