aw how sweet. your teacher would love this if she read it, which i hope she has. I'm sure she's very special and that she deserves this. great work!

~Sorrow~

This was lovely! It was nice to see something up like this and she must be a really inspirational person.
Great work!
~Queenvixta xx

oh wow! lol. Im sure Miss Patel will like that...hehe
Im feeling a bit sad too - now whose gonna give us 'pep' talks?!

Wow, this was great. Did she die?

Nice, way to keep the metaphor going strong through the whole piece... somepeople let it get weak in parts... i don't think my teachers and myself ever got along this well... generally it's mutual annoyance ;] but i like this