"as your devoid-of-meaning polytone tells me, if
I'm your favourite A
and if my penchant for better accents than yours
is a cultural supplement, to be taken once a day,"

SICK. Man, this is a great piece of work right here. Kills it well, I could follow it well and it's all got a nice little sliding rhythm to it. Great stuff, all goes well and pretty easy to read. The chest hair bit seemed a bit flighty to me, but it didn't take away from it. Awesome stuff

Your poems are really good, u hould believe that, they've got style are different and not repetitive i liked this alot - well done.

i have to say that i've never read anything that is like this, and i like it very much.

A very interesting poem, much enjoyed reading this. It is quite different from what I normally come across on Fictionpress and it's a refreshing read. The poem has a strong ending and some wonderful (and sometimes quirky) imagery. So, good work and thank you for the review.

m pretty. i really like the way it sounds. nice work.