Interesting little portrait. Reminds me less of a pirate and more of an icy sorceress or something magic, immortal...The lines "but a smile pricks her mouth/showing that she/is still a woman/She holds the control of the/moon in her eyes" are good because they show a comparison between personal detail and impersonal power.

Ooh, good! It's been a while since I've seen (and read) this book but I know what you're talking about...

This poem's really good, but the line with "spilt" seems to break the rhythm, because it's so short, but of course this is freeverse, so whatever. All in all I do like this poem, and I like the subject matter, and your choice of not putting in punctuation--it gives it flow.