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| chouchou 2008-07-25 ch 17,  | abuseJesse, you stupid fool~~ wake up to beautiful Seth! |
| chouchou 2008-07-25 ch 11, | abuseOh lalalaa! Seth baby go for the kill! |
| chouchou 2008-07-25 ch 10, | abuseI'm addidcted. Seth sounds hot. So does Archer though. Graw it's going to be hard to pick a side. And I can't wait for Jesse to begin her revelations about the opposite gender... |
| mia5081 2008-07-23 ch 17, | abuseHehe, poor Seth was probably very...interested in her, if you know what I mean lol Update soon! ~Mia |
| Stahlut 2008-07-23 ch 17, | abuseI loved it and can't wait to read more. |
| YoursMarilyn 2008-07-22 ch 17, | abusei love this story. thanks for updating, you actually make my day and make it all the more goofier and lighthearted. do people really live so outrageously in reality... |
| Veronica Kimble 2008-07-22 ch 17, | abuselol. i liked the dress shopping part. i still cant beleive the sales clerk was that stupid though... |
| GrannyP 2008-07-21 ch 17, | abuseSeth's protectiveness was so cute in this chapter! He totally LOVED going dress shopping with her and buying her the dress because he thought she looked good in it. It was also great that he let her think she had stolen it... but it was a nice move for him, otherwise she wouldn't have gotten the dress, and he wouldn't have had the opportunity to see her in it again. They both win! Only one minor thing: as an American... we don't wear "dressing gowns"... I'm not even 100 percent sure that I know what that is... maybe rich people do... I don't know... but it just stuck out.. thought I would tell you, so now you know... But oh man, this was so cute! The tension is killing me though! Ah! They are so perfect for each other, but Jesse is so stubborn! I can't wait to see how you continue with this! |
| lainey<3 2008-07-21 ch 17, anon. | abuseI LOVE YOU! yay a new chapter! :] this made me happy. i was having a really bad day and even though i should be writing my english essay right now, i decided to read this instead. at least it cheered me up. keep up the awesome work. you are one of the best writers on here for sure. :] update as son as you can! |
| poeticgrace 2008-07-21 ch 17, | abusei've just discovered this story and let me tell he you how awesome it is. VERY VERY AWESOME. i love it and you for writing it and i can't wait to read more. the plot line is so original and the characters are all amazing and lovable. UD asap :] |
| Gigi 2008-07-21 ch 17, anon. | abusei loove jesse and Seth =D |
| koerle 2008-07-21 ch 17, | abuseGreat chapter! I thought she was going tho get over her " I'm gay" defence. She's bi at best. The sparks between Seth and her can set a wet log of wood on fire! Seth is very cute. How he tricked her into buying her a dress, and how he's worried about her slut-dress. |
| Jevanminx 2008-07-21 ch 17, | abuseOh I love the sound of that orange dress, hehehehe. JM |
| Essevera 2008-07-21 ch 17, | abusenice chapter |
| Lady of Confusion 2008-07-21 ch 17, | abuseThese guys are crazy, but i got to love them! UPDATE ASAP! GREAT CHAPTER! |