wait is this done?? it says complete.

pleasee update soon. please. i freakin love this. xD

God that was soo funny!! Though her situation in this chapter was pretty damn embarrasing i have to say!
I cant believe you discontinued this, I WANNA READ MORE (as well as many others) so please continue with this :)

Dude, this story is so awsome... Nice...

ZOMG! I luf you're sense of humour. It's so...me-like! ^_^ (PS. Could you tell me what ZOMG stands for (Z_ Oh My God!), I don't know but have always always wanted to use it! =P)

Anywhoo. Ace and Isabelle (tell me I spelt it right) are so cute. Ace's comeback's are so adorably hilarious and the two have amazingly hilarious chemistry. They should completely get together one day.

Also, please tell me you update regularly because I would die if I don't get a weekly (if not daily) dose of this beauty.

PS. Considering this is script-writing practice, would you mind dearly to add at least initials of the person speaking...like I was temporarily confused when the brother came in. ...Or it could've been one of those frequent blonde moments I seem to have so much of even though I'm not blonde.

PPS. Are you into role-playing by any odd chance? Just asking cause your humour and such remind me of people who do.

PS. FAVOURITED!

UPDATE REGULARLY, PLEASE?

Mucho Lufs,
Jez.

good dialog, but it NEEDS more! it needs discription and explanations, setting, and just MORE. i have no idea what the characters look like or where they are or anything. so you might want to work on that.

more, more, MORE!

I don't know how u write these chapters, but I'm in love with this story... it's have been my guy therapy this week.

Can't wait to read the next update!
-hurry, hurry ^_^ -

*Is Ace's brother going to be a regular? He seems like a charming motherfucker- hehe

Will you update already?

Great addition. It was good for a laugh. =] Please update soon.

~Twilight Starr

Amazing chapter. It was terrific and made me laugh. Nice work. =]

~Twilight Starr

This story is pretty bomb..

Btw, I bet Isabella and Ace would make beautiful babies ;)

is Ace bald?.. if he is .. ew. i mean. lol. very interesting story. ;D

a bit confusing as to whose talking but I love it!

very good so far, very funny!

CRap I missed this my sibs and me were cracking up :P

I love this! :D "They say opposites attract. I hope you meet someone who is good-looking, intelligent, and cultured."