very beautiful - i love the message it gives! a fresh viewpoint, and great imagery. i can see all of this taking place.

WOW! I am...so impressed! This was beautiful and well written. The emotion is done very well, and your words as so intricatly poetic. The picture you paint is so clear, and the ending is so sweet.

It's a poem of awesomeness! Please demonstrate more of your talent in this area! I shall be awaiting it with bated breath, I assure you.
Night Silver's Whisper