Good poem. Nice title. Keep writing!

Good luck with poetry and life. Have a lovely day and a wonderful summer.

~Twilight Starr~

I love it! v. inspiring and beautiful!

*Jaw Drops* Whoa, that was just... I don't think I could even describe it. The flow is so natural, but the words are so powerful. And in a way it's very simple, but totally complex. I want to see more poems from you. You've got a writers gift, I will tell you that. You can inspire people in what you write, you should be very proud of that.

VERY BEAUTIFUL! I am writing a story that this would go PERFECT with. very sweet and imaginative! i love the incorporation of spirit and soul with the other 4 elements...!

wow. this is... wow... amazing! very relaxing and extremely well-written. wow. very very very very very well done!

Would you mind if I gave this a tune? the rhyme pattern is intrigueing, I sorta want to play with it. All in all, a lovely poem you have written here, and quintesentially you!