This is literally the best story I've ever read on fictionpress and I've read a lot of stories on fictionpress. You had mistakes in writing, but the what you wrote was one of the best stories/books I've ever read in my life. I actually cried at the end. I felt for Liam and Rhuben. I felt the emotion. It was so sad, but so good. I absolutely love this story.

omg. all songs i adore

Its so sad. Can't wait to read the sequel. I hope everything with their Dad gets worked out and that phsyco gets what he deserves.

This story is really good! I like it. Great job.

THAT WAS AMAZING! Love ur stories so MUCH! Keep writing!

Oh my gosh, that poor girl!! That's horrible, but this story is really good! Definitely amazing!!

that's so frustrating that he's blind. no! Now I can't wait to read the sequel. :D

Nice job. :)

How could her grown father get beat up by his 7 year old son?

I know some stories really need drama but you're just putting way too much in it. I think if you ever decide to revise this story to maybe make it a bit more simple or to have the drama spaced out more.

The grammar could use some work but I loved the way you started off the story. It was original and totally hooked me. However, her little brother seems a bit unrealistic. How could such a young kid play so many instruments especially without a parent pushing them to concentrate on it? I know some kids could do it, but it's just not an everyday thing.

this story was just..
amazing
i love the whole incorporation of your guardian angel by red jumpsuit apparatus
i gotta admit, i cried.

great job.
:)

OMG I LOVE THAT SONG! ^^
Nice chap, the tension and emotion rocked.

Woah is right! THAT ws awkward! XD

Beautfully scary. Loved it. -favorites-