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| firestar267 2007-06-11 ch 1,  | abuseI love this, I like how it makes you feel that you're there too, relaxing, it's writtin in such a way that it enables you to imagine it too, i like it, well done, keep it up and best of luck with your competition! |
| Rain Nymph 2007-06-10 ch 1, | abuseYour writing is amazing! (i think so at least) Only part that got confusing was that you have "watching the cars below pass me by me.". There is also "a small 3-bedroomed terraced", nothing wrong with it, I just normally get the whole "you have to write out numbers!" and such. Anyhow, i think its great, hope you do well in your competition. |
| Jonathan Kimberley 2007-06-10 ch 1, | abuseI can really understand every word you've written, and I have a place very similar. Just love being there - it's my release too. |