This poem is pretty good overall, well-written and intense but thre are a couple things i would change. in the lines "for goodness sake/you make me want to jump into a lake/ toward me, your emotions are so fake" the rhyme seems forced. and the line "my self-esteem, my thinking, my doings, the way i see, the way i have to be" is a bit long and doesnt fit too well. it could easily be split into two lines, probably so its "my self-esteem, my thinking, my doings/ the way i see, the way i have to be" other than that its fine, nice job.

-SB, review marathon

OMG this is it! This explains everything! I've been looking so long for a way to express my feelings about school and stuff and it's right here in front of me in black and white and red! Well done, extremely well done!

wow thats really intense i could practically picture the emotions really good going into my favs!