It actually took me a minute to realize that the lyrics were from a Linkin Park song... and then I smiled and said 'oh, Linkin Park. They rock.'

The story is pretty good. I'm kind of awful at short stories. I always want to delve deeper, stick around longer, know everything. That's what I'd like to do with this one, actually. If the history of the two girls was a little bit more pronounced... like why exactly does Anya hate her sister? Better grades doesn't seem like much of a reason to me. (*shrugs* I'm a twin myself, actually.)

I like the whole point in the beginning about no one remembering the victim. Only the killer. Nice.

I liked it! very interesting although it is a little odd that she'd kill her in a crowd of people of all places. none the less continue, I'm intriuged!

I agree that victim isn't remembered as much as the murderer. I don't have any ideas for another title.

~SirScott