awesome story :D

That was great!

I must admit that I too love a good romance as long as it comes with a happy ending!

I really like the concept you presented here. It is kind of the cliched plot, but you have added enough of your own spin that is most certainly appealing.

If you are looking for an amazing romance novelist on FictionPress, I recommend Jennifer Leigh. She's amazing.

Wow. Brilliant. Loved it.

aww this was really good =)
totally non-cliche

Wow, Brilliant, Great, Good - and I'll stop there, because the rest I disagree with and the last one - corner - I don't know what it is.
Good job, my friend. I like it.

Haha, that was cute :)
Good job!
-Aria

I don't understand how this is angst or how the title fits, since this is fluffy and cute and albeit predictable. It's well-written and a little too happily-ever-after, but I still like it. (: I think I'll go add it to my c2. (:

Wow. I just have to say that. Wow. Anyways, I wished it wasn't so short because it was really good!
I'm sick of all the popular guys and nerd girls stories. Yay for the opposite! Cheers!

adorable :)

Okay, here's a very late review. But anyway, on to the story.

I like the way you described the characters. But your writing style is kinda weird. For example, the part where you go, "my eyes blazoning my sincerity," it's strange in the way that because this is written in first person POV, you can't exactly describe your own eyes. Therefore, I don't think it's such a good phrase. Perhaps you should put across her feelings through her thoughts in this case.

Also, perhaps I didn't read it carefully, but it's kinda impossible that Derek Silvers doesn't have a girlfriend if he looks better than Eros himself.

But overall it's sweet, so good job on the whole. :D

-mavis (RF)

Woot woot. Awesome, very cute. I'll give it a 'Great' I was in the mood for this and I like the cheerleader/nerd better then the Jock/nerd, it's not used as much. That means you should write more of them ^.^ I like the style as well, though it could have used more detail. Also I love childhood best friend stories but I like childhood enemies better, heh. Do you know of any? So you'll be getting another review from me soon, in the mean-time sit tight and enjoy the weather.

hehe this story is cute xD
its amazing how you can make the popular head cheerleader into ...well... a shy-ish nice girl!

its good :) (thumbs up)

I liked it. It's really sweet. and I also like the cheerleader/nerd love instead of typical jock goes on pity date with class nerd.

aww that was so cute! :]

demn.
ireally liked this.
rewrite it!
make a story out of it dude!
im blushing right now demmit!
my gawd.
just do a 10 chapters or whatver.
dude this is good.
screw all the cliches.
this is really good.