 balloonfista 2009-11-13 . chapter 1Love it! Really really nice.
PS> I did read the whole thing. I'm insane that's why I'm commenting on chap 1
Ri |
 MistressBlack852 2009-08-24 . chapter 10intense!
oh man i love mark, i'm not gonna lie lol |
 MistressBlack852 2009-08-24 . chapter 5:D :D awesome story!!
best friend cliches are my fave! :P
i was just wondering where that quote is from lol, it seems familiar to be but i just can't remember for the life of me lol |
 candykillz 2009-07-11 . chapter 13it's beautiful! got a little teary-eyed, i finished it all in one sitting! Mark is such a sweetie! too bad guys like him don't exist in real life, he's very patient; waiting for Nat all those years. |
 Songorita 2009-06-03 . chapter 13w00t. Great story, I'm glad to see things worked out for them and that Nat realized her feelings. |
 momo3069 2009-03-04 . chapter 13*smile*
what to say? I´m so happy that your stories are on fictionpress. *hugs* |
 Hunter Pulitzer 2009-01-22 . chapter 1Hi, love the story! I'm a huge chocaholic too :)
You aren't by any chance Crazy Clavie on MC forums, are you? Cause I'm on there too, LOL. And I remember this story. :D |
 intercostalspace 2009-01-16 . chapter 11i am teary eyed! this chapter ending was just so so so sweet. |
 reader 2008-07-06 . chapter 13 When I saw the Devil's Avocado again, the soup I was drinking nearly very ungraciously got spit out because I was laughing so hard.
CUTE ENDING. YAY
Thank you! |
 reader 2008-07-06 . chapter 12 AW I WANT TO HUG SOMEONE NOW |
 reader 2008-07-06 . chapter 10 Wow. Nicely written chapter. |
 reader 2008-07-06 . chapter 4 I LOVE RATATOUILLE! I can always relate to your characters! :D
Glad to know that she plans on growing up. |
 reader 2008-07-06 . chapter 1 Uh, creepy...
kind of like the Phantom of the Opera haha. |
 rjdickert 2008-04-23 . chapter 13very cute story
:)
~rjdickert |
 xjennnny 2008-04-01 . chapter 13sweet story ;] |