Love it! Really really nice.

PS> I did read the whole thing. I'm insane that's why I'm commenting on chap 1

Ri

intense!
oh man i love mark, i'm not gonna lie lol

:D :D awesome story!!
best friend cliches are my fave! :P
i was just wondering where that quote is from lol, it seems familiar to be but i just can't remember for the life of me lol

it's beautiful! got a little teary-eyed, i finished it all in one sitting! Mark is such a sweetie! too bad guys like him don't exist in real life, he's very patient; waiting for Nat all those years.

w00t. Great story, I'm glad to see things worked out for them and that Nat realized her feelings.

*smile*
what to say? I´m so happy that your stories are on fictionpress. *hugs*

Hi, love the story! I'm a huge chocaholic too :)

You aren't by any chance Crazy Clavie on MC forums, are you? Cause I'm on there too, LOL. And I remember this story. :D

i am teary eyed! this chapter ending was just so so so sweet.

When I saw the Devil's Avocado again, the soup I was drinking nearly very ungraciously got spit out because I was laughing so hard.

CUTE ENDING. YAY

Thank you!

AW I WANT TO HUG SOMEONE NOW

Wow. Nicely written chapter.

I LOVE RATATOUILLE! I can always relate to your characters! :D

Glad to know that she plans on growing up.

Uh, creepy...
kind of like the Phantom of the Opera haha.

very cute story
:)
~rjdickert

sweet story ;]