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| rjdickert 2008-04-23 ch 13,  | abusevery cute story :) ~rjdickert |
| slightlyaddictedx3 2008-04-01 ch 13, | abusesweet story ;] |
| a beginner 2008-03-27 ch 13, | abuseamazing |
| Lieutenant Starshine 2008-03-01 ch 4, | abuseSo, I love the story and the characters, but one thing is really confusing for me. What's up with all of the chocolate in the title and the chapters? How does that relate to anything. Don't get me wrong- I love chocolate as much as the next person, I just don't see how it relates... But I love the story... and Mark. |
| Faith Adeline 2008-02-12 ch 13, | abuseWhat an adorable story. I feel you could've done a bit more with it, but it was still cute. Keep up the great work, you're a good author :) Faith |
| Laney 2008-02-08 ch 13, anon. | abuseGreat story, as sweet as chocolate! |
| Peach8321 2007-11-06 ch 13, anon. | abuseA cute story but I have to say, the original Stella one was the best, the other two were rushed a little too much. good luck on future writings! |
| emerald 2007-11-05 ch 13, anon. | abuseAww, that was beautiful, even without a wedding. Lucky girl. And lucky Mark, finally! I would love a sequel if you ever decide to write one:). |
| DSLuverGurl123 2007-10-06 ch 13, | abuseAww. THAT WAS SO CUTE :) Nice job, yet again. Okay, I'm off to read your other cute stories. They just keep getting better and better! -Katherine |
| Queensofthefreakinworld 2007-10-05 ch 13, | abuse"...I’m beginning to suspect that she knows everything and secretly is queen of the world." Woah! Let's make one thing clear I am the real queen of the world (*point at user name*) not Jessie... She is a impostor! Oh! Hehee, Anyways sorry I didn't reply been really busy. Good story. Nice ending though Nathalie mad me very angry during most of the story. Can't wait to see more of your stories. Muah! |
| dawn's unforgiving darkness 2007-09-25 ch 1, | abuseyour writing style was not too good this time sry |
| noriepie 2007-09-23 ch 13, | abuselol. so predictable, but sweet nonetheless this is like, the perfect romance story isn't it? psh |
| Murphy's Lawyer 2007-09-13 ch 13, | abuseAW! So SWEET!! (Not just the chocolate!) Loved it. Sequel? - ML |
| Murphy's Lawyer 2007-09-13 ch 12, | abuseYou ARE trying to make us all suffer!! But you're making it better.. slowly.. so I guess I'll forgive you. - ML |
| Murphy's Lawyer 2007-09-13 ch 10, | abuseNathalie's being an idiot. Yeesh. - ML |