I less than three this story. It's very well written & I sometimes feel like doing that to my computer.

Beautiful. That about sums it up. ;3 It's strange, because this is exactly what I fear I will be like in eight years... D: ... *faves* 8D

First person is my favorite perspective. Heh. Then again, that's practically all I write in...

It's well-rounded and ties itself together perfectly. You used good imagery but didn't overdo it considering how terse some of the piece is.

haha.
i love rambling, i do it many times during the day. inside my head. and mostly outside. people must think im crazy. but then again, i am.

anyway--
i love it.
its great. this kind of thinking often makes me depressed but with your style, it made me laugh and nod. :-DD
keep writing,
liz