Hey there :-)

I can already tell there's going to be a rivalry between Blake and Deren. Blake's probably going to be the over-protective friend, and I have a feeling that Deren is probably up to no good.

I've actually never heard of Gaia. I assume its some sort of online chatroom or something.

In your profile, you mentioned you weren't too good at grammar, but after reading this first chapter, I would have to disagree with you. I didn't find many mistakes at all :-)

I know what you mean about having a story play around in your head and the need to write it all down! The worst is when you forget :-(

Thank you for reviewing my story as well :-) Take care.

- elephant121

Lynn I demand to know who all the characters are based off of!! XD BTW THAT WAS SO FREAKING AWSOME!

Hey thanks for reviewing my story. God I love stories with goth people. They are way more interesting than plastic barbie characters. Yuck! Anyways I like your story. Quirky friends are the best. Keep writing. Update!

Thank you for reviewing Clubbing at Fifteen, by the way. You rock! Okay, now here's my review in return:

Your plotline doesn't flow very easily, like you feel awkward getting into the minds of your own characters. Your grammar could use some work, too. You use emotional terms, but when describing actions etc, you write robotically.
I do it too tho'. I need to work on that. :D

great start! I can't wait till you add some more. I hope Daren's not going to hurt Lynn, that wouldn't be good =( i really like Lynn's character but i think that Blake has a think for her. hope they get together or at least Blake finds someone else that he's even more crazy about. can't wait until you update!

I like your story and i hope you update soon!

hey am i your first reviewer? YAY GO ME! i really like this story...you will update soon. i want to know why daren is 'bad news'...PLEASE UPDATE!
-your emo twin

Good story! Keep on going.