wah

soo awesome!

lol. brown cow's dad is soo bogan

love the dream..
so random =]
-narci is soo clueless

freebies... better than crossdressing anyday
thatd be soo funny if echo really did turn out like narci
best friends with a mirror...

ohh- a crazy fan girl for a mum
how creepy xD

oh.. soo swet
he can go to aldi, i think the cardboard boxes r free there even though you hav to pay for a plastic bag

love the logic behind 'captain hook'!!
tis story is awesome-

woah
hes had his own house
rich-bastard
lmao-

i think im a devoted clown..
=]

wah! teacher student relationship
lol-

hey
i think Ill fit in...
all of them...
xcept the first, second, third, fourth
that leaves with nothing

Ill make a categoryfive for no one in particular

Aw... I can't believe this is over...you should write more random adventures, like maybe when they're all grown up.

:D Lol. "But seduction insists on wearing skimpy clothes." I liked that scene.

It's kind of sad seeing this story end. I loved it. :)

Lol. "Oh my gosh, did we..." "Oh we totally did, Echo! It was the hottest night ever!"

Nice. Echo is such a loyal friend to Peita. I like all these after-the-actual-story scenes. :D

hi lyn! hahaha...love ya story! echo is the koolest name eva...i'm gonna name my doll echo after echo1 echo rulz!

aww..that scene in the room was so sweet.i'm gushing in front of the screen again..sigh*but its such a sweet story!!