Nice story, not too long for a one shot, which I like. Adorable though :)

You use such good imagery but, wow, that was really depressing.

Good work!

Wishing you well,

Izzy

I have a charecter named Adrian and one named Gavin, but they are not together. your Adrian was totally different from my Adrian but your Gavin was almost the same

I read this over and over, and it somehow always gets me. It's beautifully written, well done.

:]

Wow, if this is the worst thing you've ever written, I'd love to read one where you're at your best. Great job!

The Scarlet Flame

Hey me again, :P finally another story! it wasnt as good as the other ones, but i still loved it! :P well keep on writing! hope finish another book soon! plz do so i can read it

Gaurdian Of Hell

cute, wish it was longer :(

I loved this one!

:D Cute. I love it.