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Reviews For: Suave and Klutz

x3life 2008-03-13 ch 1,	abuseaw thats depressing =(
Hyperroll 2008-02-11 ch 1,	abusegreat story. it's well written and feel kind of... realistic. i just like it a lot of some reason. i can't really explain it.
FamousOneLiners 2007-07-22 ch 1, anon.	abusei loved this
ess3sandra 2007-06-22 ch 1,	abusethis really feels like a true one shot, or extreamly real, i really liked reading it, you make it GRAND. but i sort of feel as if there was no real end, that it just goes in a cirkle round and round with the same problems over and over. am i right? maby not a story, that would take the story apart, but maby anoter oneshot, or if you could tell me what really happend to them.
Sally Can Wait 2007-06-18 ch 1,	abuseUGH. They need to stop being so stubborn. Both of them! Right now! Because I said so. -Sally :3
woodstock1969 2007-06-15 ch 1,	abuseI love the characters in this story! They're very well developed, considering the length. The ending was sad, of course, but I think it works well. It makes the story original and also adds a subtle message about what unrestrained pride can do in terms of hurting relationships. Great job!
DancingChaChaFruit 2007-06-12 ch 1,	abuseOoh, I really liked this. I could actually really relate to it, because I was in a similar (well, sort of) situation not too long ago. And it's always good when a reader can related to the story, becuase it means that it's realistic. Which this was. I'm glad that the main character considered his reputation as a player (I guess), and didn't let herself just get completely lost in him like you find in most romance stories here on FP where the leady guy is/was a player. You know. I also really like the relationship you developed between Klutz and Suave (it feels so weird to refer to characters like that as if those words were their actual names). You couldn't help but empathize with Klutz. At least, I couldn't. Anyway, I really enjoyed this (if you couldn't tell). It's definitely going into my favorites. You're a fantastic writer. Keep it up!! =) PS. This is random, but I like how Adam looked over at the protagonist with sympathy and held her hand. It said a lot.
Lady Katreina 2007-06-12 ch 1, anon.	abuseNya. I like it. (Leaves me wondering if- I mean how long it'll take for them to get together. Ah the joys of one-shots. Thank you for it.
happy ending? 2007-06-12 ch 1, anon.	abuseaw its so cute and sad.. i wanted a happy ending!
Melody Of A Dream 2007-06-11 ch 1,	abuseO... It was very good. I love the two characters, they're very interesting. Too bad it's only a one shot. I'd like to get to know these characters a bit more. Great Job though! Keep it up!

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