You tried way too hard to rhyme. I like the idea behind this. Though my impression of that song's last line is different from yours, I liked what you wrote. Still, the rhyming seemed forced; I'd love to see what you could write without it!
-Cristina

What! Only one review? MURDER! Ok, I'll review. First, great poem. I myself have never liked that last line, but you gloified it. I love the bit about God, being a big Christion myself. I'm going to to look out for stuff my you on this sight. I'm writing my own story called "Chris and Maridia." maby you could r&r?

I never really thought into it before reading this. I'm probably not going to be able to hear that song without thinking of this from now on, nice poem :)