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| hahaheeheehaha 2008-05-04 ch 1,  | abuseaww thats such a good poem. this is exactly how i feel about my scars too - i don't exactly want to show them off, but they're special to me. thanks for writing this. |
| Jenna 2008-01-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseI really liked this. :) |
| sin olvido 2007-06-11 ch 1, | abuseThe repetition doesn't add much to the poem -- when every line starts with the same two words, the effect of having "they are" every six or so lines is basically thrown away. I do like the idea, though; you've done a self-harm poem better than most could do one. Also, if the scars are a weakness, a pain, a "testimony of hard times," as you put it, show that in your writing. Telling us so doesn't do much. All in all, okay! Keep writing! -Cristina |
| Ashelin 2007-06-11 ch 1, | abuseThough I find harming yourself to be less than wonderful, I really loved the emotions in this poem. They can show who a person really is. You did a great job. Keep it up. |