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| Dye-Ann Defame 2007-07-11 ch 5, | abusehello Hana! you told me about this story, so i wanted to read it! When i read the first chapter i thought it was poem! And i was like. 'wow! this is very good'. and then i saw the other chapters. and i grew happier to see that it continues.! I'm halfway through this story. and i'm really glad you wrote this. It's really well written with a great plot. It's nice to know you have another side to your writting. This side many ppl can relate too. well, keep writing! you have a talent for it! regards, Dye-ann Defame. |
| Fleeting Moment 2007-07-08 ch 12, | abuseAW!1 THIS IS THE MOST AMAZING STORY! I LOVED IT! |
| three.word.lies 2007-07-08 ch 5, | abuseyouve got to pay your reviewers, if not already. they made this story sound amazing. i mean it's okay but miriam's stuttering is annoying and its more like fantasy cos it seems too good to be true, you know? there's no evident plot either..there's nothing to follow..=\ |
| fangsofhell 2007-07-08 ch 12, | abuseman i am so freakin happy now! this is probably my number one favorite story in fictionpress! |
| fangsofhell 2007-07-08 ch 11, | abuse*squeals* oh no. i woke my parents up from their sleep. whatever. this chapter is *squealslouder* so exciting! i can't wait for that kiss to come! oops go to go! |
| Fleeting Moment 2007-07-07 ch 11, | abuseE, I'M SQUEALING! UPDATE as soon as possible! THIS IS SO AWSOME! |
| Cicero Williams 2007-07-07 ch 11, | abuseand BAM! She wakes up! And I swear, if you use that cop out of a deus ex machina, I will be royally ** off! |
| Fleeting Moment 2007-07-07 ch 10, | abuseA, I wish she could figure it out! UPDATE! |
| fangsofhell 2007-07-07 ch 10, | abuseyay! she is going for julius! not a bad choice! she did pick julius right? i'll find out soon. keep on uptdating! |
| Fleeting Moment 2007-07-06 ch 9, | abuseA, THIS IS SO0 EXSITING! UPDATE PLEASE I NEED TO KNOW MORE! |
| Fleeting Moment 2007-07-02 ch 8, | abuseIt's to short! I need more, cause this story is so...mysteriuos. UPDATE PLEASE! |
| fangsofhell 2007-07-01 ch 8, | abusethanks for uptdating! again you almost mad me cry!but this time i don't know why.neh. keep on uptdating! can't wait for julius and miriam to kiss! ek! |
| fangsofhell 2007-06-28 ch 7, | abusejulius!julius!julius! girl i would be going with julius! i mean he is the one! please please pick him! |
| Fleeting Moment 2007-06-28 ch 7, | abuseJULIUS OF COURCE! I LOVE HIM, AND THE STORY! UPDATE! |
| fangsofhell 2007-06-24 ch 6, | abuseah man! can you please write more? i am so excited with this story. it's as if i can almost feel miriam's pain. man, your good at this story. continue... |