I likey. =]

Very good. I love suicide stories. Nice 'expanded moment,' as my teacher would say (AHH! She is invading my mind!) with all the descriptions. And I like the ending.

Oh wow. I absolutely loved this. It was positively amazing. Just keep writing, as I'd love to read more. It was rather touching too :]

Wow, that was really good!

Wow! This is pretty intense. I like it.

Keep writing!

I loved it, I completely loved it... it was beautifully written, angsty to the point where it was almost painful to read. And it felt real, I was right there in the bathroom with her, I could almost hear the screams.
The whole thing with the family portray really spoke to me, maybe due to personal experience, and I thought it was really great!
I hope you'll write more on fictionpress in the future, because you are really talented (but that, I already told you, haven't I?^^)
"You think that the words they say might be so sharp that they cut through the air, but the love of your life is so sharp it cuts through anything" - That particular line is my favorite, I love it...

(See? first thing in the morning, like I promised!! ... so, okay, it's afternoon, but I got out of bed ten minutes ago... lol;) Lazy me...)

I loved it. I love you!! And I hope your muse stays as well. This was amazing. I love the character's feelings of everything and nothing at all. It's so deep and heartfelt. You really delve into the character's feelings well. Bravo!! And lots and lots of love!! ^_^