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Reviews For: What War Leaves: Forced Happines, Echoed Sweetness
erasmuss 2009-05-09 . chapter 4
Beautiful poem. I like this one, and the first one particualrly.
I just thought I would point out, that white roses are not given to soldiers, becasue in ww1, a white roses were ahnded out to the men who did not go to war, and were a symbol of cowardice and shame.
It's beautiful though. Espcialy that last stanza.
Bea 2007-08-26 . chapter 4
Hey!
I just read your poems. I really like them. I like the last one most. But the others are great as well. From the first poem I really love how you put so much meaning in these 4 lines. (here it goes...I'm from germany and really not good in english...but I hope it was okay?...)
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